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Tuesday, August 25 2015 - 12:08 AM
By: Neoriceisgood

Burk's next goal.


Now there goes a man who knows his own priorities.

7465: someone - Tuesday, August 25 2015 - 1:33 AM

And that's why she shouldn't have thanked him so soon. Everybody but you saw it coming, girl.

7466: Bisected - Tuesday, August 25 2015 - 3:17 AM

It...rocks!

7468: Tom - Tuesday, August 25 2015 - 2:50 PM

Thumbs up for grandpa's snazzy rock!

Minor complaint: in the original comic Burk figured out the Mage Baron's influence on the region by himself. Here, well, he had a random peasant girl tell him.

In other words, this Burk seems far less perceptive, which sucks, because it was a really good twist to his character (which seems dumb as a stump).

7469: Neoriceisgood - Tuesday, August 25 2015 - 3:14 PM

@Tom

http://neorice.com/aptgg_10

While the dialogue is slightly different, didn't Melany outright tell him in aptGG as well?

Otherwise, I agree it's a good twist.

13799: W - Saturday, August 12 2017 - 4:41 AM

What and who is Mage Baron... ><

13801: W - Saturday, August 12 2017 - 4:43 AM

isn't it a five-step plan? where is step five? or am I confused again


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