Thursday, June 25 2009 - 11:14 PM
By: Neoriceisgood
Role Models
Yo, tests are over so I can try spending more time on the comic again.
I gotta add though, if I failed them I may continue the break, but it'll probably be a few days till results are in.
Until then I'll just continue as always.
Today's page introduces two more royal guards, yay.
For those wondering about the ever expanding cast in the comic, there's a reason for this.
Aside from stuff like guardsmen and totally irrelevant people in the streets, there are in fact, hardly any true NPCs in my comic; although the 3 "heroes" are obviously important to some degree [mostly perspective] it's hard to say what secondary characters will/won't be important as almost all of em are named.
It's just the way I roll baby, it's just the way I roll.
Either way, don't forget to vote, register to the forums & visit the chat!
That's about it,
peace!
You are really good at making a large cast! All of them aren't just flat little cut outs to interact with. They all are really nicely written! In some cases, even the NPCs!
*gasp* swearing? But really, maybe a little excessive...
Otherwise...Oh dear Eloy, we know you don't smoke, but your drinking problem...
Also, I like that the girl is blushing pretty much this whole comic. Also Eloy in the last panel is hilarious.
@Dos:
There's been swearing before, one of the guys Tobi was fighting in Red Mind dropped a few F-bombs.
In general I won't have characters swear for no reason, unless it simply fits their personality.
I think it's a bit unrealistic to have people who'd be crude in reality to not talk crudely within a fictional world.
Agreed with Inanimate - the cast keeps expanding, and each character has her/his own catchphrase, niche, mannerism, etc.
I like that.
Swearing - I don't mind unless it's used approprietly, and not for the sake of swearing.
As if I put my name as Dos before...FFFFFF...
And now reading this 4 hours later, seems the F-bomb was dropped less than I thought it was >.<
I'll just be over in the corner being silly :P
I must say, Neo, I'm in love with your backgrounds. Do you do them all yourself?
Eloy strikes me as particularly fabulous... at least moreso than Noah. Seriously... what's with all the talk of Noah being gay? I think that Eloy's prancing and hand thing in panel 1 would give him much greater candidacy...