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Wednesday, September 22 2010 - 3:05 AM
By: Neoriceisgood

On the way to the dungeon

New week new page, will probably get the next page done later this week, so keep your eyes out for that.

Don't have a lot to report on today, hope you guys are still enjoying the comic. :)

Peace out, don't forget to vote, comment & to post in forums.

I know you want to.

1660: SomeGuy - Wednesday, September 22 2010 - 4:31 AM

Digging a deeper and deeper hole...
Maybe if he keeps going he'll come through on the other side of the planet?

1661: Tom - Wednesday, September 22 2010 - 5:08 AM

Ah, there we go, things are moving along once more, I likey :3

The guard captain's expression is quite priceless when Pablo mentions the High Priest. Now I'm intrigued as to which one it is; they're all pretty badass.

1662: curiousMetacurious - Wednesday, September 22 2010 - 7:14 AM

um! um! "assure" in the top right panel?

1663: Droidette - Wednesday, September 22 2010 - 7:41 AM

Don't take this wrong Neo, but the dialogue is getting a bit pretentious, the characters all talk like they were in a british drama of the 19th century. And I think thats why they need so many panels for a simple conversation.

Sorry, it's just my opinion, not a critique, i love your work. :D

1664: Neoriceisgood - Wednesday, September 22 2010 - 7:59 AM

@Metacurious

fixed

@Droidette

I't's a diplomat & a fairly high ranked guard, I feel like the dialogue is fitting enough considering their roles/ranks.

Easier/less "pretentious" dialogue will come when characters like Burk & Adell reach the spotlight again.

1665: Drza - Wednesday, September 22 2010 - 1:41 PM

This is all good and all but, can we see some of Noah's story or Tobi's soon? this whole castle fiasco is starting to wear a lil thin, and feels like its slowly picking up place.

1666: Neoriceisgood - Wednesday, September 22 2010 - 9:02 PM

@Drza

Last time I tried juggling three stories I got a massive burn-out, not happening again.


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